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Some thing may be chang my mind as I look at the picture for a second time. I decised to stay.
The man told me his name was Henry. That night ,Henry invited to talk about many different things about me and about her.
The next day passed quietly. Thursday evening we had a visiter. He was a big great heared minor named Tom.
” I just came for a few minetes that’s queen she’s coming home.” He explained,”is any lose?” ”oh,yes.”the man replied. ”I got a letter. Would you like to hear it?” He took a yellow letter out of his short pocket and read it to us.
“It was a full love ,loving messages to him and to other people. They are closes ,fimilies and neighbors.”
when the man finished to read it , he looked at his friend. ”oh, no,you are doring at it again,Tom. You always cry when I read a letter from her. I am going to tell her this time.”
“now, you must not do that,Henry.” The great heared minor said,” I am getting old and any little sorror make me cry. I really want hoping she was be here tonight.”
The next day ,Friday, another old minor came to visit. He asked to hear the letter. The message you knowed made him cry ,too. “We all miss her so much.”he said.
Saturday finally came. I fond I was looking at my watch very ofen.
Henry notised this. “ you don ‘t think something has happened to her,do you?”
“yes,@” I smiled and said that I was sure she was just fine. But he did not seem satisfied.
I was glad to see his two friends, Tom and Joe.
Coming down the road as the sun began to set, the old minors were carring in.” guitars!” they also brought flowers and a bottle of wiskey. They bought the flowers and wiskeys and began to play some fast and lively songs on the guitars. henry’s friends kept giving him glasses of wiskey, which they made him free.
When I rearched for one of two glasses left on the table,Tom stopped my arm.
粗体是我自己觉得不对的地方,请高人指教啊!!
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