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Visitors at Egypt’s Giza pyramids on Saturday got a rare opportunity. They were able to catch a glimpse inside and underground chamber just south of the great pyramid containing the pieces of an ancient funerary boat which many believe was intended to ferry the pharaoh khufu into the afterlife.

A video camera was inserted into the unexcavated pit. Visitors watch images of dissembled wooden sailing ship on the large monitor inside and nearby solar boat museum.

Now through a camera, we can /

From the pits directly to this screen, that you would see what, see the wood small and big ones. And it would see mats and also you would see a gropes. And you can see for about twenty meters all this video has been laid like this / more than 4,500 years ago.

In 1987, a team from the national geographic society drilled a hole through one of the line stone blocks, sealing the chamber from the above and inserted a video camera. Inside they found stacks of wood for both similar to one excavated from a nearby peak in 1958. it’s been decided that the boat would remain in this tomb for preservation, dating back 4600 years. here is the most spectacular vessels to discover to date.

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Visitors at Egypt’s Giza’s pyramids on Saturday got a rare opportunity. They were able to catch a glimpse inside an underground chamber just south of the Great Pyramid containing the pieces of ancient funerary boat which many believe was intended to ferry the pharaoh Khufu into the afterlife. A video camera was inserted into the unexcavated pit. Visitors watched images of the disassembled wooden sailing ship on a large monitor inside the nearby Solar Boat Museum.

Now, through a camera, we transfer photograph directly, from the pits directly to this, this cliff that you would see wood, see that wood, small and big ones, and you see masts, and also you would see, ur, ropes and you can see for about 20 meters. All this material has been laid like this for more than 4500 years ago.

In 1987, a team from the National Geographic Society drilled a hole through one of the limestone blocks sealing the chamber from above and inserted a video camera. Inside, they found stacks of wood for a both similar to one excavated from nearby pit in 1958. It’s been decided that the boat was remain in its tomb for preservation. Dating back 4600 years, they are the most spectacular vessels discovered to date.

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Vistors at eygypt paramid on saturday got real opportunity. They were able to catch glims inside the great chamber.they just saw great eygpt containing pieces of inch fineral boot.They are federal cooful into the after life.A video camera was inserted into upwist pit.vistors could watch videos from large monitor inside nearby sonia both museum.”Now, through camera we can see…….They see wood ,see the wood smaller and bigger ones and see mass and also you can see chope. You can see live more than 500 years ago. In 1987, teams from national geograghy society , dive a hole through the .. insert the video camera, inside found stick wood which some both similar to one in 1987.It has been decided to the boot remain the tomb for the preservation dating back 4600, It was the most popular vessle discoveried today
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Visitors at Egypt's Gize Pyramids on Saturday got a rare opportunity. They were able to catch a glimpse inside an underground chamber just south of the great pyramid containing the pieces of an ancient funerary boat which many believe was intend to ferry the Pharaoh Khufu into the afterlife. A video camera was inserted into the unexcavated pit. Visitors watched images of the dissembled wooden sailing ship on a large monitor inside the nearby Solar Boat Museum.

 

Now through a camera which transferred a photo of the grave directly from the pits directly to this screen that you will see wood, see the wood, small and big ones and you will see mats and also you will see ropes and you can see for about 20 meters all these material has been laid like this for more than 4,500 years ago.

 

In 1997, a team from the national geographic society drilled a hole through one of the limestone blocks sealing the chamber from above and inserted a video camera. Inside they found stakes of wood for a boat similar to one excavated from a nearby pit in 1958. It's been decided that the boat will remain in its tomb for preservation. Dating back 4,600 years, they are most spectacular vessels discovered to date.

 

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Visitors at Egypt's Giza Pyramids on Saturday got a rare opportunity. They were able to catch a glimpse inside an underground chamber just south of the Great Pyramid containing the pieces of an ancient funerary boat which many believe was intended to ferry the Pharaoh Khufu into the afterlife. A video camera was inserted into the unexcavated pit. Visitors watched images of the disassembled wooden sailing ship on a large monitor inside the nearby Solar Boat Museum.

 

Now, through a camera we transfer the photograph directly from the pits directly to this, this screen that you will see wood, see that wood, small and big ones, and you'll see mats, and also you will see, ur, ropes, and you can see for about 20 meters. All \ this material has been laid like this for more than 4,500 years ago.

 

In 1987, a team from the National Geographic Society drilled a hole through one of the limestone blocks sealing the chamber from \ above and inserted a video camera. Inside, they found stacks of wood for a boat similar to one excavated from a nearby pit in 1958. It's been decided that the boat would remain in its tomb for preservation. Dating back 4,600 years, they are the most spectacular vessels discovered to date.

 

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All  this material has been laid like this for more than 4,500 years ago.

 

大家有没有觉得这句句子有问题啊?

我觉的这个ago应该omit,可是omit的话还是有问题,因为be laid不是延续性的动词:

All  this material has been laid like this for more than 4,500 years .

 

 

be laid就成问题了,我认为这样更合适:All this material has been laying like this for more than 4,500 years .

 

 

 

[ 本帖最后由 seeyou8286 于 2008-9-8 19:52 编辑 ]
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lay laid laid 这里的lay是放置,因此就是指这些物品4500年以前就被这样放置了

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原帖由 蜗牛牧师 于 2008-9-8 10:41 PM 发表 lay laid laid 这里的lay是放置,因此就是指这些物品4500年以前就被这样放置了

也许我上面的改法不太对,或许这样更合理些:

I think "has been lying here for 4,500 years" is natural.

 

经过多方求证,那个埃及老头的这句话确实有问题。

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Hi, there!

The question is put following:

All this material has been laid like this for more than 4,500 years ago.



Is this sentence correct? I mean whether I should omit "ago"?
I think it is more proper like this:"All this material has been laid like this for more than 4,500 years."
How do you think about this, guys?

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Re: for 4,500 years ago

Almost perfect. Try:

"All this material has been laying here like this for more than 4,500 years."
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Re: for 4,500 years ago

You are right, seeyou. The inclusion of "ago" is incorrect.

I would tend to say, "This material has been laid out like this for more than 4,500 years."

 

 

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我也明白了,觉得是有点不对,我其实刚才想说LAY OUT 来着,可是想想估计问题不是在这个上面所以没写

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