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They anticipate a 5-day journey. Che writes a letter to his mother, informing her of his actions. Hilda is too mailed it if he should die in battle. In that sense,saying his last goodbyes to Hilda and his young daughter that if he survived he would see them again. But you know the revolution called.

Two A.M, on the morning of November 25 1955, 82 men board the “Granma”.
With our lights extinguished, we left the port to Spain, made it a funnel nights of men, and all sorts of material. Fidel’s words began to take into reality .In 1956 we should be free or we should be mortals.

His cause was revolution in Latin America, next ejected was Cuban,to Liberate Cuba. And He resisted to called himself Ernest Guevara, he had become Che.

27-year-old Che Guevara has joined Fidel Castro and 80 others on an armed expedition to overthrow Cuban president Fulgensio Batista. On November 26, 1955, the small army boards an old boat name the Granma and heads for Havana. 19 miles of the Florida Coast, the island of Cuba is enjoying its benefit from its booming tour industry

Havana was the whore house of the Caribbean. It was a place where Americans went on dirty weekends, there are a lot of sex shows, show girls, was full of prostitutes,/drugs.
It was a kind of Havana atmosphere towards a lot of American tourist …
There were a lot of Cuban(s) .There were Cuban(s)./ that was basically run in military by dictatorship.

Although the Einsendhower administration supports Batista.Most Cubans consider him a ruthless dictator.Fulgensio Batista was much of a saga,is ever governed a land of the American country.He was somebody who was considered behold into the U.S economic interest, to the interest of the U.S mafia in Cuba

The 7-day passage board on the Gradma has been turbulent . The entire boat become an attic board, it was ridiculous and tragic, men with anguish faces ,holding their stomachs ,some wear their heads in pockets, others lying in the strangest position, immobile, sort of rebounming

It was an unmitigated disaster, they lost their bearings, they lost the men overboard, bleater saved him. When they eventually reached the coast of Cuba, they landed in the wrong place.

They arrive in Cuban 2 days’ late in a brought daylight.As the old boat approaches the Coloradas Beach they head on Samba. Founders and head of the stumble shore into a marsh.Before the troops have the chance to regroup. Batisga’s air force attacks and since then Che and the rest of Fidel Castro’s men flee.

They are able to invade and re-forces in the next 3 days but on December 5th, their luck runs out. In the matter of a second of hurricane of bullets, we saw the attitude of Dantiedo Gutesta scenes around us. Stuck and yelled, try to hide behind single stock of sugar cane. And another without really knowing why, right now for silence and a miss of commanders upward.

More than 2/3 were massacred immediately. Che was wounded in the neck. He had to make a split -second choice between taking with him his Riffle ammunition or the first-aid kid. He left the first-aid kid and took the ammunition.
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(提醒一下,你的虽然改了标点和一些日期的和其他错误,有些欠妥,主要的语法你错了,旁白说的是现在时,被采访对象说的才是过去时,而你“改”的都是过去时,显然是错的;

另外,不要把没错的地方也改了。举例: boarded the "Grandma". 是board不是boarded,而Granma不是Grandma这是史实,拉丁文,不清楚的可以先查史实。另外,逗号问题你也非得把正确的单词一起改么?Batista's 和Batista's 是一样的,这个’单引号的问问题,有必要把整个Batista单词都圈了么?turbulent. 和turbulent . 有什么区别(无区别,除了多了一个空格)?faces, 和faces , 留了多个空格,也算错么? 其他例子太多,不一一说明。如果照你的改法,那么所有标点都是错的了,整篇文章都是红的。当然,听写出来的错误一定存在,而且不少,但你没找到应该要改的错误,而是把不应该改的红了一大片。

其实听文章不是练你的标点是否正确,是看你有否听到内容,这点大家都清楚。 。说得有点多,但是觉得你改文章的态度不好。所以希望你是基于内容而不是改出来觉得好看才改。这是对别人的尊重也是对你自己的尊重。如果有兴趣,请你翻看前面4期的连载,看看大家是怎么改的,请你看看' 或者 ’算不算错误,谢谢!

最后只说一句: Correct the mistakes by the FACTS. It's a way you repect yourself and others! If you are not sure about them, please search the words and historic facts on a GOOD search engine.)

They anticipate a 5-day journey. Che writes a letter to his mother, informing her of his actions. Hilda is to mail it if he should die in battle. In that sense, saying his last goodbyes to Hilda and his young daughter that if he survived he would see them again. But you know the revolution called.

Two A. M, on the morning of November 25, 1955, 82 men board the "Granma".
With our lights extinguished, we left the port to Spain, made it a funnel nights of men, and all sorts of material. Fidel's words began to take into reality . In 1956 we shall be free or we shall be mortals.

This course was revolution in Latin America, and next objective was Cuba, to liberate Cuba. And He resisted to call himself Ernest Guevara, he had become Che.

27-year-old Che Guevara has joined Fidel Castro and 80 others on an armed expedition to overthrow Cuban president Fulgensio Batista. On November 25, 1955, the small army boards an old boat named the Granma and heads for Havana. 19 miles off the Florida Coast, the island of Cuba is enjoying its benefit from its booming tour industry.

Havana was the whore house of the Caribbean. It was a place where Americans went on dirty weekends, there are a lot of sex shows, show girls, was full of prostitutes /drugs.
It was a kind of Havana atmosphere towards a lot of American tourist thought.
There were some / . There were Cuban(s). The Cuba that was basically run in military by dictatorship.

Although the Einsendhower administration supports Batista, most Cubans consider him a ruthless dictator. Fulgensio Batista was as much of a saga, is ever governed a land of the American country. He was somebody who was considered behold into the U. S economic interest, to the interest of the U. S mafia in Cuba.

The 7-day passage board on the Granma has been turbulent. The entire boat become an attic board, it was ridiculous and tragic, men with anguish faces, holding their stomachs, some wear their hands in pockets, others lying in the strangest positions, immobile, ***

It was an unmitigated disaster. They lost their bearings. They lost the men overboard, later saved him, when they eventually reached the coast of Cuba, they landed in the wrong place.

They arrive in Cuban 2 days late in a broad daylight. As the old boat approaches the last Coloradas Beach they head on Samba. / and head off the stumble shore into a marsh. Before the troops have the chance to regroup, Batisga's air force attacks and since then Che and the rest of Fidel Castro's men flee.

They are able to invade and re-forces for the next 3 days. But on December 5th, their luck runs out. In the matter of a second of hurricane of bullets, we saw the attitude of Dantiedo Gutesta scenes around us. Stuck and yelled, trying to hide behind single stock of sugar cane. And another without really knowing why, / out for silence and a miss of commanders upward.

More than 2/3 were massacred immediately. Che was wounded in the neck. He had to make a split -second choice between taking with him his riffle ammunition or the first-aid kit. He left the first-aid kit and took the ammunition.
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